Hello teacher and classmates, today I am tell you about my holidays plans
In first place, I going to sleep too much. I will arrange my room, make my bed well, visit some friends and family. I going to resume my exercises at least 2 times at week. Also, I want study some things about electricity and computation I have postponed.
I wish travel far away but I have not money and I doubt that works soon. I going to travel surely to snowy mountains near Santiago between two or four days. I would like travel to that place because I practice mountaineering and I could not get out of Santiago, I was too busy by univesity, and I miss rest and distract me with landscapes and nature.
I would like travel with my friend, we are organizing our times to select a day.
The perfect holidays for me are relaxed and it include know new places, but the most important for me is at end of holidays I will not have many things to do, otherwise I will be stressed and and I can not enjoy my this one.
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ReplyDeleteHi Alvaro,
ReplyDeleteI will make some comments about your blog that you should take into consideration for the test next week.
To express future, say: I AM GOING TO TELL YOU ABOUT... or I WILL TELL YOU ABOUT...
To express wishes: I want TO study...
I WISH TO travel but I DON´T HAVE MONEY.
I WOULD LIKE TO travel...
What is " I doubt that works soon"?
Finally, say I miss TO rest and distract MYSELF.
This idea is not clear: "I will not have many things to do, otherwise I will be stressed and and I can not enjoy my this one".
TASK 3
LEXIS 1.5
GRAM 0.5= 5 pts = 4.0